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Ode to a Flower

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A single orchid blue blooms in my room,
For long its kind face by the light has stood.
A flower’s longevity I’ve misunderstood,
For its companions a quick wilt assumed;
As soon as they bloomed from their bud, their womb
To behold the light as long as they could,
The laws of nature proclaimed that they should
Fall down and fade into an inglorious tomb.
For a long time I pondered on the truth:
With this one flower what had nature meant?
Slowly the answer to my question came:
My other passions came quickly and went,
Save for you but you don’t feel the same;
You are my flower, blue my love for you.
Another Petrarchian sonnet. I tried my best to get everything down to form, but certain parts still feel wonked up. Particularly the transition from the first eight lines to the last six.

Edits are forthcoming, I should think.

To ~Autumn16Solstice, if you ever look at this: looks like I was wrong when I said she couldn't be my muse.

Edit: Submitted to :iconrhyme-and-reason:
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Thoughtful-Writer's avatar
You're style seems cleaned up a bit in this one
It speaks of love but a love that everyone can connect to really and using a simple subject as a centerpiece (the flower) make it easier for the reader to be drawn in and really feel for your piece.

Applause for you sweet