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For all the things I couldn't do,
For all my plans that fell through,
For the lies I told in lieu of truth,
I am sorrowful.

For all your tomorrows that wouldn't come,
For all my wrongs in their awful sum,
For the words I used that made you glum,
I am regretful.

For all the smiles you put on my face,
For all your beauty and all your grace,
For the warmth you gave in each embrace,
I am joyful.
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teardownthefence Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010
short and sweet. I like it.
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Swords-and-Bandages Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. And also for the fave. :)
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Murkymoon Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010
Beautiful :aww:
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Swords-and-Bandages Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. And thank you for the fave as well. :D
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Murkymoon Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010
^^ No problem
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Swords-and-Bandages Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:peace::)
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lisha-marie Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
This is soooo sweet :)
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Swords-and-Bandages Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. And for the fave, too! :)
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lisha-marie Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
you're welcome! :D
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Swords-and-Bandages Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:peace::)
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Blood-Of-Porcelain Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010
I really like this poem it has a sharpness to it.
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Swords-and-Bandages Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, and thank you for the fave. Sharpness was what I was aiming for, so I guess I succeeded there...
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rocky-loves-emily Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
this is great, i really do enjoy your writing style.
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Swords-and-Bandages Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. For the :+fav: as well.
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rocky-loves-emily Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
you are welcome
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Swords-and-Bandages Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:peace::)
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CarnageCrow Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010
<3
Amazing.
5/5
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Swords-and-Bandages Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :D
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danisuh Featured By Owner May 20, 2010   Traditional Artist
Poems of the heart will get me every single time...beautiful write;)
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Swords-and-Bandages Featured By Owner May 20, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. Originally, I tried to give this a tragic twist; didn't work out that way, as you can see.
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danisuh Featured By Owner May 20, 2010   Traditional Artist
It might not necessarily be a tragic twist, but it's human.
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Swords-and-Bandages Featured By Owner May 20, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
There's a tenderness here, I think.
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chocolateraisins Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010
:blowkiss: Lovely.
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Swords-and-Bandages Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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Ionait Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2010
lovely :)
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Swords-and-Bandages Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :D
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namenotrequired Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Very very nice :D Is it a song? I see potential as a good song :D
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Swords-and-Bandages Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Not really a song. Could be the basis of one, but I rarely write lyrics (and even the ones I write are raps).

Thanks. :)
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namenotrequired Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2010  Student Interface Designer
Ah alright :) Welcome :P
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Swords-and-Bandages Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:peace:
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Professional Writer
Fantastic... :clap:
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Swords-and-Bandages Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :bow:
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2010  Professional Writer
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:icondragonschest03plz::icondragonschest04plz: :iconwelcome1plz::iconwelcome2plz::iconwelcome3plz::iconwelcome4plz: :iconkivawildrose:
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darkemoprincess Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Nicely done my friend!
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Swords-and-Bandages Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :)

I thought I was better off being to-the-point here; I guess I was right.
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darkemoprincess Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
^-^ You're welcome
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Swords-and-Bandages Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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darkemoprincess Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
^-^
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